Posted Sunday, January 2, 2005
Bruce --

Here's a modification of that first alternative page we put up on Thursday.

We've wordsmithed (and numbered) the descriptive paragraphs and have made some subtle design changes to the icon strip.

Perhaps not all -- but some -- of these left-side copy changes should enhance your final cut -- which could then remain fairly "standard" through your results-based test of several right-side alternatives.

Please let me know when you've had a chance to review it.

Best --

-- Rik